@YDS: Nice.
@Renasci: If you startet posting here to improve your german, don't stop just because it might suck right now. At least for me, there's no better way to learn than just doing it. So keep trying to write german stuff, but dont use automatic translators (not even as help) , what they do is wrong, and if you do something wrong we can tell you how to do better.
PS: There is a lot of schadenfreude and weisswurst at the kindergarten!