Screenthread #51 - I want to believe

[Steinwachs]

@Yummi
The second screen looks a bit repetitive from there maybe you could breathe a little more life but otherwise everything looks great.

[YummyDrumsticks]

Hm. Okay.

I reconstructed buckingham palace's throne room, haha.

[Renasci]

Sprechblasen mit vielsagenden Ausdrücken zwecks Rüberbringen von Emotionen.
Und bei der Map hab ich mir auch Mühe gebeben, sieht man hoffentlich!

Facesets sind entweder kleine verküppelte Bilder die Textboxen noch kleiner machen als sie eh schon sind oder man nimmt 'se als Pictures und sie verdecken den halben Screen,
ich will aber, dass man den Screen sieht - - - - > der Plaaaan!

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I like that you used some unique emotion bubbles!
Ich mag dass Sie verwendet einzigartig verwendeten Grafiken für Emotionen!

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The last time I was here, someone asked me if I was making a Fullmetal Alchemist fangame...
At first I didn't want to make one because it's a fangame, but in the end, it haunted made me to work on FMA fangames XD
I don't know German very well but I'll try to make a German patch so I would learn!

Das letzte Mal war ich hier, fragte mich jemand, ob Ich machte eine Fullmetal Alchemist Fan-Spiel ...
Anfangs ich war mir nicht sicher wenn ich eines erstellen wollen aber wenn diese Person gefragt, ich wollte es tun!
Mein Deutsch ist nicht gut, aber ich werde versuchen, eine Deutsch-Version zu machen!

I hope my German is passable, I really tried!

[Multi-Master1988]

Das letzte Mal war ich hier, fragte mich jemand, ob Ich machte eine Fullmetal Alchemist Fan-Spiel ...
Anfangs ich war mir nicht sicher wenn ich eines erstellen wollen aber wenn diese Person gefragt, ich wollte es tun!
Mein Deutsch ist nicht gut, aber ich werde versuchen, eine Deutsch-Version zu machen!

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Versuchs doch erst mal auf Englisch es wäre sicherlich für Spieler sowie auch für dich als
Entwickler einfacher.
falls jemand lust hat das zu übersetzten bitte nur zu mein Englisch ist grauenvoll.... -.-"

Lg
Multi-Master1988

[Rosa Canina]

Just do it in english. We german are not that bad in english (reading... talking is a little bit different XD).

Your Screens are beautiful. Yeah, I really like them a lot (and I dont know FMA very well).
I am a huge fan of Visual Novel (yeah... that is no surprise, most of germans own visual novel are my
work XD). Everytime I see something like a VN, I am really happy. There are not enough english
and german novels... ^^


So, hoffen wir, dass ich jetzt nicht nur Nonsense gequasselt habe.
Lesen = Prima
Schreiben = Naja

[Ave]

The last time I was here, someone asked me if I was making a Fullmetal Alchemist fangame...
At first I didn't want to make one because it's a fangame, but in the end, it haunted made me to work on FMA fangames XD

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Haha, I guess that was me! - Could you explain how the Gameplay works? For me it looks like a Visual Novel at the moment. (Nothing against VN's, just saying ^^'') . And I think you should first work on the english version and then ask someone for help with the german patch. Good luck!

[Davy Jones]

@Yummy Drumsticks:
Nice ones as usual, can't criticize anything =)

@Renasci:
Is that a visual novel or are these just cutscenes? By the way, the lower right of the message box has some ugly leftovers from the background.

[Renasci]

Versuchs doch erst mal auf Englisch es wäre sicherlich für Spieler sowie auch für dich als
Entwickler einfacher.
falls jemand lust hat das zu übersetzten bitte nur zu mein Englisch ist grauenvoll.... -.-"

Lg
Multi-Master1988

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I definitely understand what you meant here. I was planning to have a German version (you can select from English or German) so that my German will be better. It'll be nice to play German games and surf the boards without consulting the dictionary all the time. And the best way to learn is application right? But I understand that it'll be horrible if the German is horrible on my side ahuhuhuh ;_;

@Rosa Canina I understand~ But yes it's a Visual Novel with a battle system! Mostly a Visual Novel.
@Davy Jones, I didn't even notice that! thank you for the heads up!
@Aventor Aha, so that was you! In all honesty, we're working on 2 FMA Fangames for now and this is one of them (A visual novel) since it has the assets already done. The other one is kind of hard to do because both of me and my partner aren't that good. The battle system looks like this:


The numbers on top of the cards are the card power.
Healing has 25% 50% 100% recovery to HP
Attack and Defense has 1,2,3,4,5,6 levels
While Alchemy (not shown) follows 25% 50%

We're still improving the battle system though, it's not by all means final.
There's also exploration and you hover the mouse to the areas (they change graphic ). You can roam around 6x from day 3 onwards.

[Zirconia]

@Renasci: Your screens are exellent. Your Battle System is good and the map is also good structured. Okay... A good structured map is important, but... (god, my english is awfull...) I mean that the complete screen is good. (God... English lesson in 9th grade are not enough...)

[Ave]

@Renasci
Like it! But I think the bottom of the cards doesn't fit into the whole picture. I hope you know what I mean.. The rest is quite neat. And by the way: I looked at your homepage and saw some cool screenshots, for example the menu. You should post them here too!

[BDraw]

@YummyDrumsticks:
The throne room turned out really well, great work! But I think I've spotted two little mistakes: I'm not 100% sure, but shouldn't it be "with all due respect" on the first screen? The second one would be on the last screen, "completely" instead of "compleatly".
That aside - amazing as usual!

[Corti]

@YDS: Nice.

@Renasci: If you startet posting here to improve your german, don't stop just because it might suck right now. At least for me, there's no better way to learn than just doing it. So keep trying to write german stuff, but dont use automatic translators (not even as help) , what they do is wrong, and if you do something wrong we can tell you how to do better.

PS: There is a lot of schadenfreude and weisswurst at the kindergarten!

[Renasci]

@Ocin I understand, don't worry! Thank you <3
@Corti I think I'll have to work on learning more and study German 101. I'm going to practice more!
@Aventor Thank you! By the menus you mean this?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db7V-...ature=youtu.be

(is too tired to try german)

[Ave]

@Aventor Thank you! By the menus you mean this?

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Exactly! :3

[Stray]

@Renasci:
That looks quite good... really! You made these sprites yourself?
That's the best FMA VN-RPG-Maker game I've ever seen before.

(is too tired to try german)

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Your german is not good enough I think, to translate the whole game.

But I could try it, if you make a demo or something like that, because I like the pictures and the idea very much. ^^

[Steinwachs]

Hier mal ein Ausschnitt aus meinem WB-Projekt. Nichts besonderes aber ich muss
mich auch erstmal in Sachen Mapping wieder reinarbeiten.