Hallo werte Community!
Habe gestern diesen Bereich des MMX Netzwerkes entdeckt. 2007/2008 hatte ich ein Bandprojekt mit einem Kumpel, wofür ich zahlreiche songtexte geschrieben habe. Ich werde nach und nach sie hier reinposten, und hoffe auf Meinungen, konstruktive Kritik, vernichtende Kritik zu meiner englischen Grammatik, Jubelrufe, whatever, schreibt einfach was euch einfällt.
Last Angel falling Montag, 28. Juli 2008
Don`t worry brother, it IS my blood
Wasted flowing down like river flood.
Broken legs and calloused arms
I` m tough and I can bear these harms.
Useless fights and senseless killings
But how can it ease their feelings?
They `re spilling the blood of their enemies
It is cruel, barbaric, everyone sees-
My mission is over, my victory was not long
But no one will see any tears, till the grave I rest strong.
Men shackled my hands and feet
I have my creed- And I`m ready to bleed.
I have been their angel of death
Choking their throat to their last breath
How could an angel be beaten by these scum`s?
How could a cowardly treason turn it all wrong?
But I won`t deny – nor my master neither my mission.
I`m a dead man walking, but also a man with visions
I will die for the idealistic dreams I had
I`m going to an unknown place, but not sad…
-Dark Rain- Benjamin T Huck 28.05.08
Chorus
Back in memories is the (day)
When the sky turned (gray)
So many lost what wanted to gain
When there is dripping down [into] dark rain
1.)
A building seems to be so strong
How could this power station turn it wrong?
The pride of a high-tech-fallen world
But the prize to pay is this worth?
2.)
A nation small and weak
Not much money indeed
A wish- a better life for everyone
Now I see the chaos cause the alarm
Bridge II
Panic in the eyes of the habitants
A fear like lots of hunted elephants
The poison is unvisible and kills just slow
One accident- a land, on ground now creeps and crawls
Soweit von mir! Sorry für schlechte Grammatik oder ähnliches. Feedback sehr willkommen. Deutsche Sachen kommen auch (wenn auch wenige)
MfG
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