The Ocarinist

[Jerome Denis Andre]

Just don't do it in English, it reads horribly. What's the point anyway?

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I'm making this Game in origin for a foreign forum ( theocarinanetwork.com ) ...

Das Gameplay klingt eigentlich ziemlich interessant. Ich kann nur hoffen, dass du das dann liebevoller umsetzt als das, was es bisher zu geben scheint.

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Nun; ...
Es läuft im Grunde darauf hinaus in verschiedenen Situationen die richtigen Okarinas und Melodien anzuwenden ... manchmal noch unter Zeitdruck ...

ZB.

Du betrittst einen Raum ... Sofort schliest sich hinter dir die Türe, und Sand rieselt in den Raum durch mehrere Rohre ... du hast 30 Sekunden Zeit um aus dem Raum zu entkommen ...

=> Okarina des Windes [+Symphony of Wind] um den bereits am Boden liegenden Sand zu entfernen ...
=> Okarina der Erde [+ Hymn of Earth] um die (steinerne) 2. Tür zu öffnen ...

ODER (2. Bsp).

In einem Raum mit einem Gegner; Eine Leiter führt zu einer Empore ...

=>Leiter hochklettern
=> Okarina des Wassers [+ Waters Requiem]

=> Raum füllt sich mit Wasser (der untere Teil); Gegner ersäuft ...

Wenn ich mir die Screens so ansehe, denke ich, dass das Spiel noch in einem frühen Stadium steckt.

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Öhm ... Ja ...
Stimmt schon ...

Well, doesn't sound ok in German or in English. "Fürchterlich... Ich habe meine dreifache Okarina kaputtgemacht..." is so... don't get me wrong, but it sounds pretty childish, as if a eight years old boy has written that sentence. Plus it means triple, and not tripple; English is not equal to German, applied to the sound of words itself.

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Well, you are right ... There should be only 1 "p" in "Triple" - "I'll fix that ..."

But no ... It's not "Kaputtgemacht" it's "zerbrochen" ...
Ocarinas are made of clay ... They break very easy ...
Thre is a reason why ALL "better" Ocs comes with Protective-Suitcases ...

And Yes ... It would be "terrible" to breake a Triple-Oc ...
Well ... they are ... Expensive ...
(See.: Focalink Triple; STL Bass-Triple; Maparam Triple; ...)

There´s a little mistake.
You wrote, that he obtained the Ocarina of Earth in that dungeon.
But then the female-ghost tells him to search for the Ocarina of Water and Earth.
Well, if thats the case.. Hey Jonathan, look into your pocket! ... Yippie, you've
just found the Ocarina of Earth again! xD
Just kidding. Surely you wanted to write he should search for the Oca of Air und Water.

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Arrrrr ... You are right ... I'll fix that ...

Good luck!

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Thanks ;-)

Well, the story is very clichée with this dragon who awakes every 1000 years but okay.
The only thing that could be interesting is this ghost lovestory...but it could also be terribly strange...

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Well ... Dragons don't HAVE TO be the Bad guys ...
I can tell you that in the End of the Game some things are ... not the way they are told Jonathan ...