Jaaaa Kritik!
Danke danke.
Gedicht:

I dream

I close my eyes and fall asleep,
I see your face in front of me.

Your eyes are shining
just like the moon at night,
My eyes they are dazzling,
and taking away my sight.

I open my eyes and the dream disappears,
staying back just plenty of fears.

Remembering your face again,
but this will stay a dream.
From the sky is falling the rain,
drippin' onto my skin.

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