Ach ja, ich hab' den letzten Absatz des letzten Gedichts vergessen, wurde schon editiert.
Hier ist schon das nächste:

My sister

My sister, who ruins her life,
why does she do that, why why why?
Sinkin' down, step by step,
why does she do that, I wanna cry!

You think, she's an a**hole?
Sometimes I think so too.
Watch her a bit nearer and you'll see,
you're the one here, who is the fool.

Almost everyday sad,
because she can't see her boyfriend. Seeing her that way,
makes me feel bad.

So if you meet her one day,
know that, what she deserves,
are good friends, of light a ray,
who help her, whatever she does.

So, das wäre eins. Wo ist denn die tolle Kritik?
Ich hab gleich noch eins gemacht:

I wish

I wish, I had a friend, to tell him everything,
I wish, I could tell my problems without crying.

I wish, people weren't so mean,
I wish, I was as happy, as I seem.

I wish, I was good at school,
I wish, I wasn't such a fool.

I wish, my father wouldn't hate my sis,
I wish, my sister wouldn't ruin her life.
I wish, people would not have a fist,
to hurt other people, till they die.

I wish, I could dream again,
I wish, I could say "I can".

I wish, I had a friend, like you,
I wish, that my wish will come true.


Wie schon immer ist Kritik erlaubt und natürlich erfragt! Ich hoffe, jemand bemerkt mich!