Mh, the main character have much similarities with Ichigo from Bleach (the appearence/look). Could it be, that he inspired you ?

Furthermore which program do you use now to create the game ? One of these 3D Maker es recommended to you ? How long do you think needs a demo to show us some "moving-pics" ?

Hope you keep working and perhaps you could do a full-presentation (with the story/character/screens and many more) in this board