Zitat Zitat von zuffel
Vielen Dank dir!
Muss es jetzt nur noch umschreiben, weil ich so gut Englisch nicht kann, ansonsten fällt's auf. Aber danke für deine Hilfe
Wenn du das so übernimmst, wie von Zeus21 gepostet, fällt das nicht auf - das ist nämlich alles andere als gutes Englisch :S

Schon allein "Es kommt immer anders!" durch "It comes always differently!" spricht Bände.
Und "ablaufen" heisst ganz sicher nicht "run off"

Mal sehen:

Who doesn’t dream of a perfect date? Many people have the most varied ideas about how that perfect date could progress. Whether it’s candlelight at a restaurant table or simply on the sofa at home: it’s always different!
“The perfect date has to be spontaneous”, that’s also what Sandra thought before she asked out a boy from her school. Excitedly she stood in front of the bathroom mirror and tried to get her hair into shape. It was her very first date and therefore she was particularly nervous.

A little later she left her apartment and ran down the dimly-lit street to the school. There she should wait for her date. Sandra entered the dark schoolyard and sat on a bench. Not even five minutes had passed before a boy approached her. He greeted her in a friendly way and planted a fond kiss on her cheek. Sandra felt as though she had blushed and was a little sheepish. Eventually they walked arm in arm to a downtown restaurant.

After the two of them had entered, they sat around a romantically-decorated table next to a window. Sandra sat across from her attender and they looked at each other. In the middle of the table sat a candle which had been burning ever since the two arrived.
They ate together, talked and had fun and noticed that they had a lot in common.
But even the most wonderful evening has to end eventually.
It was already close to midnight when Sandra and her date rose from the table. They went out into the night together and walked the same way back.
“May I walk you home as well?”, her attendant asked.
“Yes, that would be sweet”, Sandra replied and smiled at him.

A few minutes later they stood before Sandra’s door. Her date gave her a last kiss on the cheek before going home himself. Sandra unlocked the door and entered the dark hallway. She switched on the light, put her jacket on the hanger, went into the living room and fell happily into a chair. Now she really knew: the perfect date existed – and she had experienced it – personally.

Die Version musst du allerdings wirklich noch an deine Englisch-Skills anpassen, befürchte ich