Maria: (frustrated) How long to you plan on moping around?
Sophia: That’s a mean thing to say! His father just died, you know! How about a
little more sympathy?
Maria: Fayt, your father left something to the two of us! What are you going to
do about it?
Fayt doesn’t respond.
Maria: I don’t care what you do. I’m going to Moonbase. …Even if I have to go
alone!
After Fayt became silent for a brief moment he gets up from his seat.
Fayt: Sorry. I’ll go, too…to Moonbase. We’ll go get whatever my father left
behind.
Maria wipes the tear from her eye.
Maria: Good.
Sophia: (doesn’t want Fayt to be miserable) Fayt… Maria has a point. It’s not
like you to be so depressed. But…don’t be too hard on yourself.
Fayt: Ok… I’m sorry for worrying you.
Sophia: That’s okay.
Perfektes Beispiel dafür, dass die Dialoge den Charakteren sämtliche Persönlichkeit raubt. Fayt und Sophia erleben eine 180°Wendung innerhalb einer Minute. Fayt, der einfach denkt, wo er doch eben noch am trauern war, "Jo, sie hat recht" und Sophia, die plötzlich Maria recht gibt, wo sie sie eben noch kritisierte. Ganz davon zu schweigen, dass das, was Maria sagt, übelst dämlich ist. Hallo? Hier ist gerade der Dad gestorben! (Und nebenbei sämtliche Crewmitglieder, die hier auf Mission gingen. Aber Hauptsache um Albel/Nel bangen
)
Gute Charaktere ändern ihre Meinung und Emotionen nicht einfach von einer Sekunde auf die andere und gute Dialoge schaffen es Gefühle und Emotionen zu wecken und killen sie nicht mit dummen Klischee-Sätzen und unpassendem Gefühlswendungen.
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NEL ENDING
Nel kneels in the Audience Room of Castle Aquaria.
Nel: …After learning about our country’s state of confusion, the noblemen of
Greeton, where the damage was relatively minor, formed a conspiracy to take
advantage of the situation. However, now that the Lord of Arzem has been
stricken with an illness, the conspiracy is slowly dying out.
Aquaria XXVII: Is that so… This is very unfortunate for the Lord of Arzem, yet
very unfortunate for our country. We have asked out citizens to suffer too much
already. Now, our Sacred Kingdom of Aquaria has lost even the ability to avoid
useless conflicts. In the years to come, until our Kingdom’s strength has
recovered, we will have to ask you to perform many difficult missions. We are
counting on you.
Nel: Yes, Your Majesty! Please, this goes without saying. I have yet to earn
the honor of serving the Crimson Blade, but I will not betray Your Majesty’s
sacred trust. I will spare no efforts in these tasks.
Magistrate Lasselle: It would seem we can stop worrying about Greeton for a
while. Although Airyglyph is another story, according to the reports of the
Spectral Legion, everything is peaceful in the Sanmite region. So it would
appear that domestic problems are our main concern…
Aquaria XXVII: We agree. We do not want to believe this, but…
Nel: Domestic problems…?
Magistrate Lasselle: We just received a report from Clair. There is a sense of
restlessness among certain wealthy merchants in Peterny. We have not determined
the size or objectives of this plot, or who the ringleaders are, or any such
details, but we must begin an official investigation. You are to select one
appropriate person to handle this. We also plan to assign a member of the Chain
Legion, who is familiar with the local area to assist in this investigation.
Langweilig!!!!!!! Gott, wie öde. Das soll ein Ende sein. Da soll der Spieler sich freuen. Aber der schläft ein. (Ich zumindest) Und dann sprechen die sprecher auch noch so langsam und die chillige Ending Musik die bei allen Endings läuft gibt dem Zuschauer noch den Rest. Worst Ending ever...
Und das Fayt mit Nel ist noch schlimmer.....
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