Gedichte, Musiktexte und andere poetische Ergüsse #2

[T.U.F.K.A.S.]

hier habe ich einen selbst geschriebenen song, den ich meiner ex geschrieben und gewidmet habe... sagt mir bitte wie ihr ihn findet, er hört sich ein bisschen an wie Placebos "Every me, every you" und hat einen ähnlichen rythmus. bitteschön:

Together with you

It is possible to think
That iI am pretty close to sink
Sink in my one feelings
Yeah might be a real thing

Grown composition in myself
Anger mixed with happiness
Angry 'cos you left me, for sure
Happy that I'm not with you anymore

I said I hate you, but it's okay
It couldn't have been that long anyway
True love - impossible
When someone is together with you

Competition, who's the best
At breaking on this as the last
I'm out of it, it's not my beaf
Not gonna call you to self-destruct at least

Cruel crap, that is true
Not for me, maybe for you
You're crumbling slowly on the floor
Complete calmness in my core

I told nothing on the phone
Nothing but silence like a stone
True hate - possible
After some guy 's been together with you

You are incomplete and broke
For me it's the final stroke
True love - possible
But not when I'm together with you

With you [4x]

I should explode as you should know
Instead I'm charmed and rational
True love - impossible
When someone is together with you

With you [4x]

When someone is together with you...