Wenigstens einer dem es gefällt. Vielen Dank dafürZitat
Original geschrieben von -[IoI]-Ins@ne
Oh mein Gott Alex ich liebe diese Zeile:
Bei mir ist sie so wahr, und das mit den "hips" nicht nur des Reimes Willen ^^
*zensored^^*
Ansonsten gefällt mir noch "without you", welches wirklich sehr gelungen ist!
Mach nur weiter!
. Da denkt man sich, dass man sie doch nicht so ganz umsonst geschrieben hat. ^^
Hab dann gerade ein Weiteres fertig gestellt. Kommt mir zwar nicht so besonders gelungen vor diesmal poste es aber trotzdem.
Paralyzing feelings
I never knew
How I should do
When I see you.
Suddenly I was not able to think clearly any more
And this wasn’t even sore
Your beauty has numb my mind
Which lies now behind.
Your gesture has paralyzed me
This is the fee
Also this is fine
But your soul has stolen mine,
With one wink of your eye
Which are the mirrors of the soul
It decided to fly
To you to make us whole,
When the two souls fusion together
Nothing other will matter.
We’ll live in this world
That we’ve created
And which is fated
To exist only because of our will
And I still can’t think of anything other than you
Who dominates my mind
But have you to?
I don’t know if I’ll ever find
A way to escape from this magic
But this isn’t tragic
because if I should be honest
I don’t care
And I don’t want to share
You to anyone other who is the best.
I’ll never rest
To do all I have to please you
And the only thing left I can is to pray
That you are too
Want to stay
At my side
Even when it becomes night.
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