The Screens are not the best. You shouldn't use so much RTP Chipsets, look for other chipsets in the internet, or try to paint some on your own (if you are good at painting ). Your mapping isn't the best, too. Your mountains (..oder? Klippen = mountains? Naja..denk schon XD) should't be so..ähm..gerade? aka symmetrisch..(hope youe can understand this )And there should be more flowers, animals, or other things in your maps
But the screens aren't sooooooo bad, and I think you can do better

PS: I know, I'm not good @ English ^^ But I think it's possible to understand me..istn't it? ^_~