Naja...Im grunde suche ich kein Team...sondern jemand der meine Idee in die Tat umsetzt da ich ziemlich talentlos in allen RPG Maker Gebieten bin, sprich Mapping, Chara Making, etc...ausserdem hab ich nicht so viel Zeit .
Wenn also jemand interesse hat bitte PMen...net mailen...auf meine Mail geh ich fast net mehr...oder sogar hier antworten
Hier ist der Prolog zu meiner kleinen feinen Story (leider in Englisch....sorry) :
PROLOGUE :
There is war going on between the 4 big parts of the world.
The reason for the war is very simple as they claim : Territory. Because Territory is power and power is what they want.
The 4 nations live in a rich and resourceful environment.
People in the capital citys and in the more inner lands of the 4 powers don't really care about this brutal war,
because it is only fought at the far away borders of the nations. During the centuries, some of those people even
forgot the war. Only the poor people are the ones, that experience the brutal bloodshed, due to the lack of money,
which prevents them from getting a home in the inside of the 4 Nations. They have only enough to live in the poor
citys and villages, where the war is going on.
There is one village who hasn't been reached by either of the 4 Nations yet, a little, more or less poor village,
where people live together in harmony with Nature, but who also have knowledge about the war going on for centuries now,
and they know, that they can't live there peacefully forever...because one of the Nations will reach them some day.
The priest and the other villagers, whose village is in the exact middle of the four Powers, know that they can't live there peacefully forever,
because one of the Powers will reach them some day...and they will have to participate in this bloody and unnecessary war,
because it has been, until now, that every poor citizen whose country or Village has been conquered, has to participate fighting.
If those people refuse they will be considered as enemy and will be executed immediately (men, women and children alike).
This hasn't been confirmed by the Nation's Army Officials, but it is a rumor that most of the poor villages told themselves due
to experiences of the worst kind.
In the village that hasn't been reached yet, known by the Name of CHIISAI there lives a young Priest, called Hake Jinjii,
who despises violence and who can't even kill an insect. He already knows that he will refuse to fight when the time has
come to decide, and he accepts his death, if it will come to this...
One day, the unevitable has come true. One of the Nations has arrived at CHIISAI and plans to take over. They arrive with countless
soldiers and start to assemble everyone who lives there to sort out the ones who fight, and the ones who refuse to do this.
The priest Haku and everyone else goes to one and the same side, they all refuse to fight in the war.
The Leader of the attack remains very calm though...and starts to grin confidently.
Haku and the villagers realize that the time of their end has come, and while the soldiers close in to them, a mother who tries
to calm their kid says kindly:
" Don't worry my child...we will go to a better place without wars, without fighting, and without differences.
Where there is no poor or rich, no wrong nor right. There is only Peace. We will go to Paradise! "
The Leader who heard this says slowly and seriously :
" Indeed. You will go to Paradise. "
End of PROLOGUE
INTRODUCTION :
The screen blacks out and Haku has a "Flashback" he doesn't know that is is one yet. He hears people talking.
One man says : " Which one is it going to be? "
Another man : " I think they are pretty identique...let's take a closer look at the results! "
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Another man : " As I already knew...one is as good as the other. "
One man : " Good! Let's make it quick now...he doesn't like it to be kept waiting...and you know how mad he'll get! "
Another man : " Alright Alright! Let's take the LEFT one...by the way...he could really be more thankful to us, don't you think so? "
One man : " Yes. But at least the payment is good... "
Another man : " You only think about money!"
One man : " Hey! My girlfriend wants that special ring she saw in a shop last time we went out! It's not my fault... "
Another man : " Ok...let's just get out of here now... "
The screen slowly fades in again and we see Haku lying on the floor of a prison cell. There are other inmates and one of them, a little
girl is poking him with her foot while asking :
" Are you dead Mister? "
A person that seems to be her mother appears behind her and takes her away from Haku...at this very moment he slowly regains consciousness.
He slowly stands up and starts looking around, then suddenly he remembers the situation he was last in, and he should be dead by now.
He recognizes some of the villagers of Chiisai, but also other, unknown people, and starts asking around. He gets to know that those are
people from other villages who have been taken over by one of the Nations. But noone really knows which Power of the 4 has reached their
village. After haing talked to everyone a soldier appears and opens the celldoor. He steps in and grabs the Mother who took her daughter
away from Haku before and takes her out, while the daughter starts to cry. Noone interfered with the soldier's doing because they are all
too scared and Haku himself doesn't like violence at all and he couldn't really move in this situation. The daughter runs to the middle
of the cell and yells at everyone, while still sobbing:
" YOU COWARDS! WHY DIDN'T YOU DO ANYTHING? "
The prisoners are embaressed and don't answer. Haku already wonders if they took the mother to execute her, and suddenly starts remembering
the soldier's face...it was kind of lifeless...but then something more terrible comes to his mind : Th soldier looked exactly like one of
the villagers of his hometown Chiisai...like Kenny, the salesman...
" This soldier...he looked exactly like him...but that can't be! We all despise this war, and we would rather die than to even think about
grabbing a weapon! "
" He also had this weird look in his eyes...what happened to him?...What's goind on in here? "
After this Haku spends a few more days in the cell while watching other people being deported...he wonders :
" When will be my turn... "
One night he has a vision/ a dream once again :
A very high-pitched clear voice talks to him :
Voice : " ...Haku... "
Haku : " What...? Who is that? "
Voice : " You needn't know now. The only thing you need to know is that you must fight! You must free your people from disaster! "
Haku : " I...? What? I can't fight! What Disaster? "
Voice : " The disaster from heavens...you need to prevent it, before it is too late! "
Haku : " I still can't follow you! Why me? Why not someone else? I can't... "
Voice : " It is your destiny...it has already been decided when you were born. "
Haku : " Destiny is for people who can't take responsibility for their acts! It is nonsense and I will never believe such! "
Voice : " Haku...you need to hear me out...please! "
Haku : " Alright. I will listen...but I will never fight! "
Voice : " We understand that you have been raised as a peaceful person...but you can't just refuse the fighting, while risking the
destruction of your planet, Hadami. "
Haku : " I can't change a thing! I'm kept here in this prison and I am sentenced to death already! It's only a matter of time! "
Voice : " It indeed is a matter of time...but not till you die... "
Haku : " What do you...? "
Voice : " Haku stop talking and listen for now. The day that follows this night will be your chance of escape. When a soldier arrives to take
one of your inmates with him, you will attack him. "
Haku : " What? "
Voice : " And in order to survive you need to kill him! "
Haku : " There's no way that I...! "
Suddenly he wakes up because he just heard the celldoor opening. The soldier steps in...and grabs a prisoner...but all of a sudden
Haku runs towards the soldier and goes in a fighting position...he wondered himself too why he'd done that. A fight starts...
Haku wins and all the prisioners flee while releasing other inmates too.
End of INTRODUCTION
Das hier ist der Anfang wie ihr sicherlich bemerkt habt xD.
Naja...jetzt kommt die Grundidee...also bitte nur weiterlesen wenn wirklich interessiert.
Tut mir leid dass es ein wenig kindisch klingt .
Die Story sollte komplett genug sein...ich braeuchte jemand der es uebernimmt...wie schon gesagt...und etwas gutes draus macht...trotzdem moechte ich noch dran beteiligt sein und in den Credits erwaehnt werden .
Da die Story auch noch nicht ganz komplett ist kann ich sie weiterschreiben sobald Interesse besteht. Jedoch liegt mir etwas daran dass professionnelere Maker-User dat bewerkstelligen.
Wenn ihr die Story selbst verraendern wollt ist das ok...die GrundIdee muss jedoch bleiben.
Ok...ist spaet jetzt...gute Nacht.
Noch wat : Die Musik wuerde ich gern beisteuern. (MP3)
Oh fast vergessen....der Titel des Spiels ist Rakuen ( = Paradies ) und ihr koennt die Sprache verwenden die ihr wollt...auf die japanischen Namen bestehe ich jedoch.
Hoffe sie gefaellt euch ein bissel und ich habe das Interesse von ein paar brillianten Gurus geweckt.
Habe Gastrollen als NPC's zu vergeben!
Ich Grüße: Ziek, desRed, Aika_otaku, Sephiroth's Angel, -emC-crux, Lazalantin2, Jackie-James, V-King, GhostDog & Anaching
HABE IM MOMENT WENIG ZEIT! BIS ICH ANTWORTE KANN ES EIN BISCHEN DAUERN!
hört sich jetzt mehr so an, als hättest du die story von jemand anderem. weil:
warum zur hölle schreibe ich eine story auf englisch, wenn sie für deutsche gemacht ist?!
das ergibt keinen sinn. so vergeht auch die lust am lesen.
schreib sie am besten nochmal auf deutsch (für die unbegabten hier xD)
Ich nehme eure Anschuldigungen ganz leicht auf...ich bin beim besten Willen net boese .
Ich habe die Story in English geschrieben weil English meine Muttersprache ist und ich persoenlich kann mich so besser ausdruecken.
Ausserdem werde ich sie nicht auf Deutsch umschreiben da ich wirklich nur auf Englisch weiterfahren moechte. Und wenn ihr sie net versteht weil ihr nicht ueber genuegend Sprachkenntnisse verfuegt oder weil ihr einfach zu faul seid koennt ihr euch recht solch nicht sehr nette Anschuldigungen sparen.
Ausserdem habe ich mich bei dieser Story ziemlich ins Zeug gelegt...und wenn jemand wie gesagt wirklich Interesse hat, oder die Story kritisieren will, mit Begruendung natuerlich soll er/sie das machen.
Und unterlasst auch in zukunft bitte solch "Die is doch nicht von dir"-Spam-antworten.
Hi!
Ich habe mir die Story jetzt Teils durchgelesen, da sie echt lang ist und dann sogar noch auf Englisch!
Egal, ich möchte sagen das mit den 4 Nations ist gut und das eine Gruppe sogar sich abtrennt vom Krieg und mit der NAtur in Frieden lebt!
Das ist gut aber das mit dem Flashback ist irgendwie von Final Fantasy!Die Story ist Teils Gut aber ich gebe dir mal einen Tip:
Such dir eine Person aus, die diese Story auch wirklich verwirklichen kann!Nur so ein Tip, denn manche nehmen die Story aber machen später einfach nicht weiter!
Aber son Typ zu finden is doch echt schwierig...naja perfekt waere ja einer wie Square oder gar M-P und Genji...jedoch bezweifle ich dass so ne "Promis" sich die Ehre geben wuerden . Bin zufrieden mit jedem der Interesse zeigt.
Und das mit den 2 Typen is FF-like? wirklich...hmm...dachte jetzt haett ich doch wirklich etwas komplett neues erfunden... ;
Original geschrieben von Kuro Neko Ich nehme eure Anschuldigungen ganz leicht auf...ich bin beim besten Willen net boese .
Ich habe die Story in English geschrieben weil English meine Muttersprache ist und ich persoenlich kann mich so besser ausdruecken.
Ausserdem werde ich sie nicht auf Deutsch umschreiben da ich wirklich nur auf Englisch weiterfahren moechte. Und wenn ihr sie net versteht weil ihr nicht ueber genuegend Sprachkenntnisse verfuegt oder weil ihr einfach zu faul seid koennt ihr euch recht solch nicht sehr nette Anschuldigungen sparen.
Ausserdem habe ich mich bei dieser Story ziemlich ins Zeug gelegt...und wenn jemand wie gesagt wirklich Interesse hat, oder die Story kritisieren will, mit Begruendung natuerlich soll er/sie das machen.
Und unterlasst auch in zukunft bitte solch "Die is doch nicht von dir"-Spam-antworten.
Danke im voraus fuer jede interessante Antwort.
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In dem Fall entschuldige ich mich rechtherzlich... Ich rede auch schon von Kind auf Englisch und wollte nicht behaupten das du sie geklaut hasat sondern nur sagen,...
Ach egal...
Die Story ist ziemlich durchdacht aber du verraetst irgendwie schon so viel warum machst du das...???
Nochmal Sorry fuer die "Anschuldigungen"
Aber ich spiel sowieso gerne Englische Spiele...
AGiE und BluredLine fand ich cool
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Zitieren
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