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    Also ich find es nicht schlecht. Obwohl es sprachlich teilweise unnötig komplizert ist, und es dadurch teilweise schwer verständlich wirkt.

    Btw. Ich konnte es auch nicht lassen und versuche gerade meinen Text umzuschreiben.

    Also ich editiere nun mal die neue Version des textes hinein

    A Dream, so clear it almost seems real
    its still a dream isnt it?

    Please tell me its a dream!
    becouse i cant stand this any longer

    i want to awake !
    i want it to be over!

    my soul is screaming
    but my mouth is still closed
    I want to run away !
    I want to escape !
    but my body wont move

    who are you?
    Why are you in my dream?
    Why arent you letting me go?
    Why?... why?... why?...

    Cant you hear me?!
    Where are you going?
    Dont let me alone!
    Please dont go!
    Please!
    Im begging you dont leave me behind!

    Somebody! anybody! Help me!
    Can somebody hear me?
    Hello?!
    Hello?!

    Im frightend
    Why am I here in this dark place?
    There must be a reason?

    Is there something you wanted to show me?
    but there is nothing!
    Im all alone in this damn dark place!
    Nobody is here, nobody cares about me
    even you left me...

    And so im wandering in this darkness
    hoping to find someone else
    and still waiting for the moment when I awake in my bed

    but wait!
    I think i can hear a scream
    I follow the direction of the scream
    the screams are getting louder
    the other person must be very close

    I look closer
    and now i can see the screaming person
    but why is she screaming

    there is another person too
    but that person doesnt seem to recongnize the screams
    and disappeared slowly in the darkness

    and suddenly everything was clear to me...
    the screams, the darkness i understood everything

    every person is alone
    everyone feels the same pain
    and there is nothing we can do to stop it

    I cant move
    and so i stand and watch the other person crying
    but then I slowly approached her
    now I stand in front of her
    we are looking at each other
    I embrace her
    and we feel relieved that we found each other

    I thank god!
    I was wrong
    Geändert von Latency (17.08.2003 um 10:09 Uhr)

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