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    A cloud of rainbow coloured dust was kicked up as she charged towards the bad guys, a machine gun in each of her front hooves. She fired blindly into the room, hoping to kill as many bad guys as possible. Blood, shell casings, ponies[...] mangled by the hail of projectiles that were flying through the air - everything seemed to be lifted off the ground and just float for a few seconds. The goons had no chance whatsoever to return fire as Dash passed them by. The first two guns' clips were empty. She threw them over her shoulders and picked up the pistols of two shot mobsters from the ground. Dash flew a U-turn and fired at the remaining three gangsters. In this moment, Fluttershy looked over her cover, her eyes fixed on the destruction Rainbow Dash was causing. She panicked. Shy picked up Pinkie Pie who was still groggy from the blow to the head and flew out of one of the windows, shattering it. Rainbow Dash followed her, leaving nothing behind but smithereens, eight dead ponies and the thought that everything might work out between her and her old friends.
    Erste beide Änderungen des Leseflusses wegen.*
    Whatsoever schreibt sich zusammen.
    Vierte weil "to fire back" in meinen Ohren doof klingt*
    Fünfte Änderung weil holperig, evtl auch "and grabbed a new pair off of two shot mobsters"*
    Coverage = Bericht(erstattung).
    Eyes fixed on/upon something

    *Kann man drüber streiten
    Geändert von Icetongue (10.05.2011 um 12:03 Uhr)

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