First off, I like your game idea, but you should file on the quality of your dialogues.
Well, doesn't sound ok in German or in English. "Fürchterlich... Ich habe meine dreifache Okarina kaputtgemacht..." is so... don't get me wrong, but it sounds pretty childish, as if a eight years old boy has written that sentence. Plus it means triple, and not tripple; English is not equal to German, applied to the sound of words itself.Zitat
Also, something confuses me, why do the statues hover in the air? Are they only placeholders for your own sprites? Because it doesn't seem as though those ones would fit into your style. Finally, to be honest, FlareShard wrote all the points I could numerate here, there is only one fact left to mention: I really like your spriting style.
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