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[Mordechaj]

I would like to tell something about our last film for a project of our English lesson in class 10. We chose (choose, chose, chosen) this topic, because we never did something like this before. Also we thought this idea was unique.

After a long discussion with my group mates, we decided to shoot (shoot, shot, shotten) a horrorfilm. Anne and Steffanie have been in my group. My boyfriend and his brother helped/were helping us to create the film.

At home we spoke about our ideas, the text, the roles, the place and the sequence of the seperate parts. We had a lot of fun. Two days later we shot the movie in my garden.
We thought it would be best to start the movie (vielleicht besser: to have the movie started?) in a car. It was the car of my boyfriend. He was our cameraman. The next part played in a dark forest. This was very difficult, because there were/have been a lot of strollers.
They watched us the whole time while we were recording the movie.

The last part played in a house on a grassland ("meadow" würde hier meinem Empfinden nach besser passen). After recording all parts I transfered the movie to my computer.
Now the hardest step started. I had to cut the bad moments (besser vielleicht "scenes") and to find/and then I searched for the right dramatic music. Further ("in addition" passt meinem Empfinden nach besser) it was not easy to find good effects.

Last there were some problems with the title, but we agreed on "Bloody Knife".
Based on this hard work, we think we were successful.



Ich bin selber nicht so die Englischschnalle, aber ich hab mir mal erlaubt, trotzdem auf Fehlersuche zu gehen. In meiner Erdreistung geb ich auch keine Garantie auf Richtigkeit, außerdem find ich, klingen einige Stellen immernoch sehr seltsam (bspw. "the right dramatic music" =/ ) .