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Hallo!

Ich muss in Englisch einen Vortrag halten über die Filme "Fluch der Karibik 1+2". Dazu gehört auch die Zusammenfassung. Ich habs mal versucht, aber irgendwie ist bei dem 1. Film auch die Zeitform nen bissl durcheinander, aber ich kriegs irgendwie nicht richtig gebacken. (Von der Zeit her soll es so sein wie bei der Zusammenfassung des 2. Films).
Wäre echt nett von euch wenn mal jemand drübergucken kann und Fehler korrigieren könnte! http://www.multimediaxis.de/images/s.../old/sm_12.gif

1. The Curse of the Black Pearl (2003)
Elizabeth Swann, the daugther of the british gouverneur, was a child when she met Will Turner. Because of a medaillon she saw that he was a pirate, but she wanted to save him and so she took it away. Otherwise he would be killed.
Years later the pirate Jack Sparrow arrives in Port Royal and saves Elizabeth from drowning. But because he’s a pirate he’s condemned to hang. But before, Barbossa, the captain of the Black Pearl, attacks Port Royal. He's searching the child of shipmate Bill Turner and the last coin to end a curse.
The curse of the Black Pearl is because of they robbed some cursed gold. So the crew is undead and only moonlight shows them as living skeletons.
They kidnapped Elizabeth, because they mistakenly believe she’s Bill Turners child. Will (who’s secretly in love with her) frees Jack for searching her. They hijacked the fastest british ship “Interceptor” and Jack, who was once the captain of the Black Pearl, told Will that his fahter was a pirate, too. In the last moment they reach the isle “isla de Muerta”, where they’re going to shed her blood. Elizabeth could escape with Will, but they caught Jack. After a big naval battle the Black Pearl crew arrested everybody from the Interceptor and banned Jack and Elizabeth to an isle where Jack was banned before. But the ship “Dauntless”could rescue them.
Back on the “Isla de Muerta” Jack planned a battle between the Black Pearl Crew and the Dauntless Crew. So Jack is able to free Will. Barbossa and Jack are fighting and because of Jack took a gold medaillon out of the chest, he’s undead too. He throws the last coin with his blood to Will and he throws his last coin with his blood and Jacks coin into the chest. Now Barbossa is a normal man, too and Jack is able to kill him. The other crew members addict to Jacks crew. Back in the harbour Jack should be hang again, but Will and Elizabeth could rescue him and so he could escape with the Black Pearl.

2. Dead Man’s chest (2006)
The 2. movie started with picking up where the first movie left off: Will Turner and Elizabeth Swann are to be married. But it’s interrupted when both are arrested for helping Captain Jack Sparrow to escape. Lord Cutler Beckett. propose a deal: He’s not going to kill them, when Will brings him the magic compass of Jack Sparrow. The compass is always showing you the thing or person you want the most of all. He will lead Beckett to the Dead Man’s chest containing the heart of Davy Jones, the captain of the “Flying Dutchman”. With it, Beckett will control the seas.
At the moment Jack isn’t able to use the compass, because he don’t know what he want.
Will finds the Black Pearl, Jack and the crew on the island “Pelegosto”. Cannibals held captive them. The cannibals think Jack is a god and so they want to kill him to free him from his body. After some wild events they could escape to sea. Jack offers Will the compass if he helps finding the key for the chest.
Later they meet the “Flying Dutchman” and Davy Jones demands 100 souls (because of a deal) in exchange for Jacks freedom. He keeps also Will as the 1. soul.
If you want to know why Elizabeth is kissing Will and Jack and whether Jack, Will and Elizabeth will survive you’ve to go to the cinema!


Ich hab die Fehler dann gleich mal im Text verbessert. Dankeschön =)

1. The Curse of the Black Pearl (2003)
Elizabeth Swann, the daugther of the british gouverneur, was a child when she found (met ist besser) Will Turner. Because of a medaillon she saw that he was a pirate, but she wanted to rescue (save) him and so she took it away. Otherwise he would be killed.
Years later the pirate Jack Sparrow arrives in Port Royal and saves Elizabeth from drowning. But because he’s a pirate he’s condemned to hang. But before Barbossa, the captain of the Black Pearl, attacks Port Royal, searching for the last coin to end a curse and also the child of shipmate Bill Turner, too. (fehlt da nicht was?)
The curse of the Black Pearl is because of they plundered (besser robbed) some cursed gold. So the crew is undead and only moonlight shows them as living skeletons.
They kidnapped Elizabeth, because they mistakenly believes she’s Bill Turners child. Will (who’s secretly in love with her) frees Jack for searching her. They hijacked the fastest british ship “Interceptor” and Jack, who was once the captain of the Black Pearl, told Will that his father was a pirate, too. In the last moment they reach the isle “Isla de Muerta”, where they’re going to shed her blood. Elizabeth could escape with Will, but they caught Jack. After a big naval battle the Black Pearl crew arrested everybody from the Interceptor and banned Jack and Elizabeth to an isle where Jack was banned before. But the ship “Dauntless” could rescue them.
Back on the “Isla de Muerta” Jack planned a battle between the Black Pearl Crew and the Dauntless Crew. So Jack is able to free Will. Barbossa and Jack are fighting and because of Jack took a gold medaillon out of the chest, he’s undead too. He throws the last coin with his blood to Will and he throws his last coin with his blood and Jacks coin into the chest. Now Barbossa is a normal man and Jack is able to kill him. They other crew members addict to them.(?) Back in the harbour Jack should be hang again, but Will and Elizabeth could rescue him and so he could escape with the Black Pearl.

Den zweiten mach ich dann später.
Rechtschreibfehler hab ich mal nicht angestrichen, einfach so berichtigt. ;)