Title screen need for 'Megbízó'

[Johnny(TM)]

Hi all!

I'm just finished my hungarian game 'A Megbízó' (Der Auftraggeber), but the current title screen is a crap. It's only a black screen with white text.
Hungarian people now testing the beta version, and they saying it's better than Amnesia(best hungarian rpg game). Well... I don't believe it, but oh well. If this is true, than I need a better title screen.
Can somebody help me?
If yes, please write me a PM and we can talk more about it.

[netwarrior]

Welcome to the community.
I didn`t know that there is also an hungarian rpg community.

I think it would be helpful, if you would give some information abour your game, such as stroy, heros and some pictures about your current game.

Is your game complete in hungarian language?
Anyway, the title sounds great! Show us your title-screen, so we have an idea what can be changed.

MfG
netwarrior

(sorry for english, i'm from hungarian)
P.S. Your English is great.

[Johnny(TM)]

Well, all right!
Anyway, if the hungarians gonna like it, I'm translating it to english. (I promised it to Marlex :) )

I don't have screenshots right now, I'm removed from my ftp, but you can watch the beta version (http://time.uw.hu/download/Mbz.exe)
(yet not perfect)

About game:
It's a real RPG, there's only 1 fight in the whole game. We're playing thief and detective in this. :D

About story:
Our main hero Willow is a thief, who has a letter to steal a statue from the king. His luck is that the king is looking for a detective, because someone killed the queen. Willow say that he's a detective, so he can look around the castle. Later he stole the statue, but... that's enough for now! :D

[netwarrior]

beta version (http://time.uw.hu/download/Mbz.exe)

Funny story, sounds great.
But somehow I habe problems with the link. It needs 30 hours until it is finished.
Send me your game to: netwarrior1981@yahoo.de
It is faster that way.

MfG
netwarrior

[Johnny(TM)]

Funny story, sounds great.
But somehow I habe problems with the link. It needs 30 hours until it is finished.
Send me your game to: netwarrior1981@yahoo.de
It is faster that way.

MfG
netwarrior

Interesting, it must work faster... I dunno. Yet I can't send you e-mail, because I'm using net in the school, and I don't have net connection at home till April. I can only say try it once again...

[netwarrior]

Well, then maybe I will try it later.

Without knowing your game, I tried it.
http://www.picupload.net/image/f301e8c8d2b5b1c4fc3a126fa.png
Tell, if you like it and what you would like to change.

MfG
netwarrior

Edit:
I see a mistake.
Wait, I will fix it.

Edit²: Fixed :)

[Johnny(TM)]

Nice, but I see you really don't know my game :D
The atmosphere is more like RPGs, it's hard to explain the hero's outlook, but, hmmm... wait a sec...
Watch here (http://yellowbeast.uw.hu/megb2.bmp)

I'm thinking about a title that the hero is ... maybe on the side of the screen, and the 'Megbízó' was written on the top of the title. :)

[netwarrior]

I'm thinking about a title that the hero is ... maybe on the side of the screen, and the 'Megbízó' was written on the top of the title. :)
I don`t know exactly what you mean by this.
Would you like the title maybe without the detective?

I think for a title it doesn´t matter if it looks not RPG.

Anyway, I found same mapping mistakes in your pic.
http://www.picupload.net/image/251c7465ee4f96713f4c91c0c.png
Took me a long time to download it, something is maybe wrong with the school-server.

[Don_Alexandro]

Sorry, but we cannot see your hero. Try this page for uploading images (it's free)

www.imageshack.us

Maybe you can use netwarriors Opening Screen, when he changes Sherlock Holmes to the heroe from your Game? The Background and the Title are very good.

[netwarrior]

You are very specific:D

http://www.picupload.net/image/dccde11f85c889c8fcd490c4f.png
Better now?

If you don't like it, changed the Hero! 8)

[Johnny(TM)]

Hmmm...

I see you must watch the game :D
Wait a sec, I'm uploading it to an other site.

[Johnny(TM)]

try this link (http://rm2k.atw.hu/Mbz.exe)

[netwarrior]

Nice Game. I like it. Expecially the coin-trick^^
By the way, there is a bug, if you talk to one the people down, there is an error-message: cannot find file gold.

I will give you these two background, then you can add you hero in there.
I think you want the same one, which is looking like the Heros Faceset.
Maybe I will try it later.
http://www.picupload.net/image/2bc432db07f74993ffa4df66f.png

http://www.picupload.net/image/d6a5475b3f3c758f85a520db0.png


']I checked your game and my anti virus prog. found a trojan.
My Norton Virus Scannner found nothing!

[[KoA-Dani]]

http://mitglied.lycos.de/hikataru/warnung.PNG

I checked your game and my anti virus prog. found a trojan.

[Johnny(TM)]

']http://mitglied.lycos.de/hikataru/warnung.PNG

I checked your game and my anti virus prog. found a trojan.

What the... :eek: :eek: :eek:
Noone noticed that before you, me either!

netwarrior:
the 2 title screen looks nice, only the megbízó flags not really nice.

Anyway, Shinshrii made a really nice title screen. :D
(yet this is the best)
http://www.juliameister.net/maker/megbizo.png

I'm not exactly happy with his hair and shading, but that's something that could be easily changed - it's just a first try after all, to see if you like the people, their placement and the darker feeling of the whole thing. With the hero being a thief and a murder story going on, something rather dark seemed to be appropriate to me.

[Don_Alexandro]

Hey! You can add a very cool effect, if you put the blood stain a bit more to the center of the screen. The Start/Load/End Thing will hide the blood. After pressing start, you teleport to an empty Map with the same Picture as a background. So the players will see the blood stain after starting the game.
After that, you can even use pictures to let the blood run down the floor.

blood stain = blood on the Floor = Blutfleck

[Johnny(TM)]

Hey! You can add a very cool effect, if you put the blood stain a bit more to the center of the screen. The Start/Load/End Thing will hide the blood. After pressing start, you teleport to an empty Map with the same Picture as a background. So the players will see the blood stain after starting the game.
After that, you can even use pictures to let the blood run down the floor.

blood stain = blood on the Floor = Blutfleck

Or I can use Maker Ultimativ to put the Start/Load/End box to the middle...
But not a bad idea!

[FF]

rofl, do you use our german programs in hungary?^^
i think the last is the best, too.
^^

[The Game]

']http://mitglied.lycos.de/hikataru/warnung.PNG

I checked your game and my anti virus prog. found a trojan.

I've found the trojan, as well. Actually, it could be, that you're using WinACE, which sometimes puts a bad signature to the archives or within them.
And, yes, Shinshrii's title is the best. :A

[netwarrior]

http://www.picupload.net/image/946b47a5e4c0f7fc12639f5ae.png
It can be still improved, but it is just an idea.

Your game is good, even if I run through the castle without knowing what to do. :rolleyes:
But it has some bugs, as mentioned. Sometimes Brun disappers and in the next map he again there.
The the athmosphere and the music are great

By the way, this one is my favourite.
http://www.picupload.net/image/eeec311b5c97d7b4f69c1d04a.png
You are a VD-Fan, aren´t you? I saw even some from UiD.

Edit:
Done! I changed the o to ó.

[Johnny(TM)]

Omg, I didn't thought I get that much title screen on 1 day :D
This is really cool title screen, I'm thinking about which one to choose...

Anyway, small error: the o is wrong, it must be ó :)
(don't worry, it just a small error ;) )

EDIT: and thx for the bug-reports. Some hungarian found this error already.

[Johnny(TM)]

You are a VD-Fan, aren´t you? I saw even some from UiD.I think UiD is the best, but VD has a really good story too

[FF]

how you can play a german game?
do you understand german?

[Johnny(TM)]

I learned german, but it was a long time ago.:)

[Raiden]

a little question johnny! Is Johnny a funny name in england or america? Why is Johnny a silly guy in Metal Gear Solid and why is "Johnny the Combo Player" a silly guy in "Magic the Gathering" (Trading Card Game)... can you say me... why?

Lol warum wiederhole ich mich immer xD

[Ziek]

Is Johnny a funny name in england or america? He's from hungary .. HOW should he know? In the Baldur's Gate series it's "Bob the Replacement", so do you think Bob is a "funny name" in england/america too?

Anyway, he's obviously a MORTAL KOMBAT Fan ... haven't you ever heard of Johnny Cage?

[Johnny(TM)]

Ziek has right, Johnny(TM) name has connection with Johnny Cage. But I can't use Johnny Cage name, because it's the trademark of Midway, so I'm using Johnny(TM) long time ago...

About the Title: thanks for all of your great help, I think I'm using Shinshrii's title and change the music. I didn't thought I get that much title on 1 day from netwarrior, I guess I put his name to the Credits under Thans to: :)

And once again: thanks to the german community for its great help.

[Giggli]

Will you stay?
(It sounds like a kind of "goodbye" :p )

[Johnny(TM)]

Will you stay?
(It sounds like a kind of "goodbye" :p )

Yeah, sometimes I'll read your forum! :)