Col-Chi
08.01.2004, 05:38
hallo, ich hab mir mal nen "entwurf" eines neuen songtextes von mir geschrieben.
wäre freundlich wenn ihn jemand auf rechtschreib- und grammatikfehler korrigieren würde, evtl auch positive und negative kritik darüber abzulassen.
zum song selbst. es geht um meine exfreundin und es ist sehr persönlich geschrieben, bin grad dabei die musik dazu zu schreiben.
danke im voraus :)
No Letter To You
These are my visions of a seeming love, repression, submission, a soul that's left alone
The confusion between my dreams and the reality,
Fucking cold reality when I woke up in winter
In our relationship I wrote you one letter and spent some money and fuel,
that's all I can do cuz my affection and My Princess ist not worth a shit
Read my writings in this letter
You won't see anything
Anything you wanna be, but you are
What's up with you, darling? Why are you shouting at me?
For nothing? Then why are you thinking so much of leaving me?
Why do I feel this pain in my stomach?
I cannot eat anything...no I'm not hungry, mom
I cannot eat anything...no, it's nothing, mom
Darling, embrace me, I have to cry...thank you
This is too sad to see you comforting me
and too confused to see YOU comforting me
Read my writings in this letter
You won't see anything
Anything you wanna be, but you are
A part of my soul has become the pain that eats me up
I realized you were friend and girlfriend , a treasure that's hard to find in live
Never thought it would be so easy to say the 3 words, but I loved you, that's true
Leave me alone!
You can't look into my eyes anymore!
You're thinking of him, and I have become nothing but a memory
No! Don't leave! It's OK!
Leave me alone!
I think, now that you're left behind, I have just advantages and you were a disadvantage for all I am
I don't have to cry, I can forget every fucking beautiful moment we spent together
Cuz it's easier to hate than to be sad
2 weeks later, you don't care about him, but still I am forgotten, rarely fucked, just when you wanted
Get me, forget him because of me, think of him, leave me, forget him, forget me
Look at you now, who's left alone? No matter, you'll see, I'll get your friend to make you bleed!
wäre freundlich wenn ihn jemand auf rechtschreib- und grammatikfehler korrigieren würde, evtl auch positive und negative kritik darüber abzulassen.
zum song selbst. es geht um meine exfreundin und es ist sehr persönlich geschrieben, bin grad dabei die musik dazu zu schreiben.
danke im voraus :)
No Letter To You
These are my visions of a seeming love, repression, submission, a soul that's left alone
The confusion between my dreams and the reality,
Fucking cold reality when I woke up in winter
In our relationship I wrote you one letter and spent some money and fuel,
that's all I can do cuz my affection and My Princess ist not worth a shit
Read my writings in this letter
You won't see anything
Anything you wanna be, but you are
What's up with you, darling? Why are you shouting at me?
For nothing? Then why are you thinking so much of leaving me?
Why do I feel this pain in my stomach?
I cannot eat anything...no I'm not hungry, mom
I cannot eat anything...no, it's nothing, mom
Darling, embrace me, I have to cry...thank you
This is too sad to see you comforting me
and too confused to see YOU comforting me
Read my writings in this letter
You won't see anything
Anything you wanna be, but you are
A part of my soul has become the pain that eats me up
I realized you were friend and girlfriend , a treasure that's hard to find in live
Never thought it would be so easy to say the 3 words, but I loved you, that's true
Leave me alone!
You can't look into my eyes anymore!
You're thinking of him, and I have become nothing but a memory
No! Don't leave! It's OK!
Leave me alone!
I think, now that you're left behind, I have just advantages and you were a disadvantage for all I am
I don't have to cry, I can forget every fucking beautiful moment we spent together
Cuz it's easier to hate than to be sad
2 weeks later, you don't care about him, but still I am forgotten, rarely fucked, just when you wanted
Get me, forget him because of me, think of him, leave me, forget him, forget me
Look at you now, who's left alone? No matter, you'll see, I'll get your friend to make you bleed!